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Massive potential

I actually caught this from Facebook haha. A friend commented on your ep. 3 preview and I was intrigued XD. So yeah, I see a lot of potential in this, the animation is very smooth and the voice actors are great as to be expected from who was cast.

I'll definitely be keeping tabs on this. Wish the episode was longer though.

CartoonCoffee responds:

Lol yeah I been getting a lot of complaints on the length of the episode. Episode 3 is over double the length of episode 2 so i hope that will make up for episode 2's length.

I was kinda afraid that putting it on facebook would be a fail but i'm glad it got someone's attention.

The voice actors are very talented and i'm in shock they want to work with me it's going to be a great series with them on the project.

Pretty good

I have to say this is pretty good. I like your art style. The only thing that is a little distracting are th spelling errors. It's not major, but that's all I feel like pointing out. Probably cuz I'm a writer first and foremost. But this is interesting and I'm looking forward to watching more.

First off if you can keep people entertained then you're doing your job. Cliches happen, don't stress them, practically everything's been done, and everything you see has been influenced by something the author/writer has read or even seen. Just continue to make it your own.

I'll make a better review/advice response in the next one, for now I'm heading out. XD

Awesome

I'm far too tired to write a meaningful review. But man, this was great. I'll be keeping an eye out on this. Good job.

0808080807? Missed it by one second...

Plot wise I am highly interested. And can't wait to see how the characters develop and why things are happening the way they are.

I like the idea of a flash comic and how it mixes animation with comic styles. I believe this has a lot of potential. While I admit the lack of voices in some areas did ruin the experience a bit, it was only a bit as I was more into the story than anything else.

I think with the next one you might want to focus more on the audio in order to balance the scenes out. It's already been mentioned that some parts there's audio that's too loud or too low.

As far as the style goes, it's your style and I think it was well done. There could have been more detail in the character and maybe some improvements in anatomy, but you're tracing from Illustrator and that can be a pain. I know...

I think it would save you time and effort to draw them directly in Flash instead of tracing them. But that's all preference and is entirely up to you.

Overall, I'm happy to see something other than a parody of a parody on NG. Something with some depth that will display typical story elements. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy some parodies, and I give the parody artists props (there are a lot of good ones out there who put the time and effort in), but I like stories, and I like things that keep me interested and it's always nice to see original works from people.

Ok that kicked ass!

So yeah, I thought this was a really good anime style intro. I think the music was great and the pacing in the animation was done well. The walk cycles looked a little weird at first, but that went away quickly. I also like the style you're using for this. This is easily a breath of fresh air man, it really is nice looking at other people's work and seeing some form of creativity and thought instead of seeing a week's worth of crap drawing and obvious/not funny jokes. I really am looking forward to seeing this series.

Also thank you, I've taken a few days off from animating and this just inspired me to go back at it again. This weekend I was an adrenaline hog with animating and got so much done in a short amount of time and with this revamp of inspiration I should probably be able to get back into it.

Once again really nice work. I don't think the guy 2 below has seen some animes before because there are really no anime intros that give background info. That's the point of the actual episode. So once again really well done and can't wait for you to get started.

Nice job

I think you did a good job on this. Yeah, the audio is a bit off, nothing major. You can fix it for the next time. The animation was good overall although I do think you could have added some more frames in for the fight scenes to make it flow a bit better.

That aside I enjoyed it.

Wow

Wow, that was extremely well done. I haven't touched Warhammer in years, but after watching this I think I may get back into it.

I would love to be able to animate as well as you one day, very good display of talent.

Too small!

I would have given you a perfect 10 if the video wasn't so small lol! But I know you well, and you love working with small sizes and resolutions....So yeah, I'm actually getting involved with newgrounds now.

Seriously though, I loved the music with it, and overall it was well done considering when you did this you were still learning. Looking forward to you posting new stuff.

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